

JimJIMJim
Descent to ashes; your distant dust eyes call it out.
As you probe through laid-out morsels, I try to catch something shining off your glasses. Some shred of Korea or some scar in your glance that would seethe hatred at the facts.
But there is nothing in your gaze but the peanuts in your hand.
What is it? To grasp life’s last sands as they worm through your fingers?
But you don’t seem to grasp at all: you are content to have them, and will never think of their eventual flight from your bones and flesh and lung


Lovesick and PressurizedLOVESICK AND PRESSURIZEDLovesick and Pressurized
Passing beneath the austere, menacing arc, trying to conceal the gun I don’t have-
(Unattended bags can be confiscated and destroyed.)
Ambling into the winged windpipe, gazing into the gray wash that is business class-
(Secure your own mask before assisting others.)
I wait for you, with the certainty of an auto-pilot. I search for a cloud with your smile at ten thousand feet. Because you are freedom from upright locked positions and you are liberation from an engine’s frustrated hum.
You are home- &


GatecrasherGATECRASHERGatecrasher
As the emerald hills of flower-fringed Eden come rising forth, drawing me out of exile and into their warm, velvet fields of clover I begin to accelerate, worried that perhaps the vision will falter with time
And as my foot begins, with frightening ease, to force miles per hour behind the sightline and as the old scenery blurs and scrolls away I can feel wind-whipped eyes begin to pour out brake fluid tears
In the anticipated impact, I don’t brace myself I only hope for airbags and a sure safety belt and with that the final yards of
California Uncle

Polished WorthBrusque eyebrows gesticulate disaffection shrugged from a deadpan demeanour,Polished Worth
bristling with iron-filing stubble.
Belated cheap aftershave smells defeat loitering smoke-like, bitter inhalations
for poorly timed passers by.
Shabbily suited, shoes scuffed, giving the impression he’d been dragged unconscious into place. At his post to cast a disparaging eye over the public. And yet, amid this flotsam and jetsam of a man, one thing demands respect.
Pinned to a creased lapel, it gleams under the fluorescents, reflecting self-importance like a ligh
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Hope you're still writing, even if you're not on dA!
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TAG UR IT! THIS IS A SEXYY TRAIN IF U RECIEVE THIS IT MEANS
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WILL HAVE BAD SEX FOR THE NEXT 30 YEARS.....GOODLUCK
I wrote it while listening to a lecture on the style of tragedy in art (an Aristotlean approach), it's based on feelings I had for a woman that no longer talks to me.
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-Toadstool
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Thank you for your wonderful comments on LOSING ME. You always take the time to write insightful thoughts about my work!!
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A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
Thanks Jack!
And a happy V day to you!
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A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
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Comment, to get comments.
Share your kindness, not your hate.
Love the art, before yourself
thank you so much for the beautiful comment you left on my last deviation, it is much, much appreciated!!
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Love the community. deviantART.
im a non fiction writer.
<3
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I'm going on a random deviant spree tonight,
trying to get to know more people around here, and you are
random deviant #40 that I am giving a
Share the dA love, and pass it on to a random deviant.
<3 Kandice
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my myspace!
` you can leave me on the corner where you found me,
i'm not for sale anymore.
thanks for commenting
you must be keeping busy away from here - i hope that you continue to write, if only for my own enjoyment.
I appreciate you stopping by!!
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A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
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Happy new one.
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"Comment, to get comments.
Share your kindness, not your hate.
Love the art, before yourself"
Yeah, sorry.
I'm a dork.
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Comment, to get comments.
Share your kindness, not your hate.
Love the art, before yourself.
"Often is the question asked, is our children learning. Every two child did, I will" - Bushie (Gotta love 'em!)
I kid
(i want to)
It is indeed a poem, I just neglected to correct the layout of the text to fit the anticipated layout of poetry. That's one of the joys about poetry however, no matter the topic or the way it's written it's still poetry
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Your Princess is in another castle!
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And I'll reply to your comment when I have time to do it justice.
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